Continuity Flaw Between Books

Noticed that I had a character one year later who was the same age as he was in the first book. Oops. Good news is that it made me realize that the three POV characters were all something-five, as in twenty-five, thirty-five and forty-five. I made one twenty-four, and the buddy of the middle one thirty-six. Otherwise it seems too coincidental, and doesn’t help to distinguish the characters for the reader. Hadn’t noticed that they all ended in five until a recent reread.


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